पेट्रोल को लाइन

पेट्रोल को लाइन....

जम्काभेट.....

देखा देख.....

माया प्रेम.....

आधि घन्टा....

अलविदा....

अलविदा.....

11 comments :

  1. Though short and sweet...but tragic end...
    :(

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  2. Thank you :) ...Life ends in a tragedy ni ta..aakar ...No one will be together anytime...I have used Half an hour symbolically ..which actually refers to our life span...and the line refers to our unending journey we make in our life..Petrol stands for perfection we want to achieve.....and we reach to the point and again move ahead....in life for achieving another perfection....and in this never ending run...we lose our half an hour..that is our life...the tragedy prevails...

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  3. jindagi petrol ko line! umm.... likes.

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  4. hmmmmmm Bhetinu chutinu yo ta ke ho, sansar ko geet ho, nasamjh timilai yo mere badai ko geet ho......

    Life is like that......

    Very short and sweet......

    Loved the way you have portrayed a full story (could be make a 2.5 hours film :D) in such a few words. Great job indeed.

    Keep it up.

    ~ J

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  5. Thank you Rajan,..

    -Anonymous : Your comments inspire me to write more :)

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  6. Ummmmmm .... "simply the best"
    Keep it up miss ....

    ~ M

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  7. site heavy bhayo

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  8. Pleasure is totally mine if my comment inspires you.

    I'm also inspired by your writing style.......Saying a lot in few words....like the saying.... thorai bolnu, tar dherai bujhnu.... :D



    - J

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  9. petrol ko line tyati laamo
    but
    lekhakle lekheka line kati chhota chhota?
    line ajhai nabadhos bhaner ho?
    Interesting!

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  10. Pleasure is totally mine if my comment inspires you.

    I'm also inspired by your writing style.......Saying a lot in few words....like the saying.... thorai bolnu, tar dherai bujhnu.... :D



    - J

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  11. Thank you Rajan,..

    -Anonymous : Your comments inspire me to write more :)

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